Solar swipe: Facebook Ad (semi long form)
How to use this swipe: Facebook Ad for cold audience
Expert notes: Clean it up. Too many links. Let the reader read and be indoctrinated a bit.
Solar energy Facebook (semi Long form) ad critique
There is some good content in there, but let’s let the reader read before getting bombarded with click now. Let them soak in all the info first, that way they are primed to click.
I like the bullet section, it’s perfect for giving the reader’s eyes a break. I am a fan of emojis, but too many emojis tells me this is an ad because your trying to grab my attention anyway possible.
And I’m not too sure what’s going on with the image 🤔 How about an original image that doesn’t look like an ad!
Try This👇
Revised Ad:
Denton County Homeowners
Even Van Gogh saw this coming…
He saw what “would” and “has” happened across the entire state of Texas to a lucky few homeowners.
So listen up, if your electric bill is over $30, prepare to brace yourself for this money saving miracle (And yes, the clock’s ticking)
🛑 Heads up: Renters, we love you, but this one’s not for you. 💔
For a limited time — if you’ve got a “Smart” Meter — you could virtually wave goodbye to your electric bills 🌅
Too good to be true?
Well, here’s the lowdown on what could happen if take the next step:
1️⃣ Swap paying “them” for paying “yourself.”
2️⃣ Keep your family safe from those ever-climbing energy costs.
3️⃣ No more fighting over the thermostat temp– stay comfy without breaking the bank.
4️⃣ Smile, knowing you’ll be making a positive impact on the environment.
5️⃣ Watch your home’s value soar.
So, are you one of the lucky few to qualify for solar energy?
It’s possible…
But here’s the catch: The energy markets are constantly changing, and there is no guarantee that this offer will last.
Plus, we’re reserving estimates for homeowners who are serious about considering solar power for their home.
If you’re ready to protect your family from the rising costs of energy and save money on electricity, then take the 60-second survey.
Click to see if you qualify today ✅
